More animation and less words. Need to find a better way to unfold the story- the flow is far too slow to keep ones attention and the scenes of any art/rudimentary animation are few and far between.
thanks for the review! :)
Not too bad Harry
I really hope you get back into your groove Harry. Your last few works haven't really been that great or funny. Your animation skills are above par- no one will deny that. But you need to fire the guy who's doing the writing.
Just my opinion
I wish you did these things with Problem Sleuth. I could never get into homestuck from following Problem Sleuth and years later I still can't get into it. Clever use of thesaurus and throwing random words together lost its appeal after the first month of homestuck. I find its fanbase to be almost as bad as bronies now.
Now I'll go on to say- fifty megabytes? What the fuck? Dude compression, learn it. I see no graphical content in here that requires my bandwidth to eat 50MB.
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