More animation and less words. Need to find a better way to unfold the story- the flow is far too slow to keep ones attention and the scenes of any art/rudimentary animation are few and far between.
thanks for the review! :)
Not too bad Harry
I really hope you get back into your groove Harry. Your last few works haven't really been that great or funny. Your animation skills are above par- no one will deny that. But you need to fire the guy who's doing the writing.
Just my opinion
I wish you did these things with Problem Sleuth. I could never get into homestuck from following Problem Sleuth and years later I still can't get into it. Clever use of thesaurus and throwing random words together lost its appeal after the first month of homestuck. I find its fanbase to be almost as bad as bronies now.
Now I'll go on to say- fifty megabytes? What the fuck? Dude compression, learn it. I see no graphical content in here that requires my bandwidth to eat 50MB.
lol murdering people for 4chan is so kawaii uguu~~
Animation is great. Story, progression, and even the VA is all on the iffy side. A joke beaten to death- don't see why it had to be 14MB.
Not enough Tran
I can't take this seriously because Kimlinh Tran is in it- and she is not every single voice. Please do a production where she is the sole voice actress. This will raise your subpar animation and Public-Television style jokes to new, greater levels.
Good animation and all,
But I hate furries.
Who said anything about furries?
The Tupac parrot just made it a 10/10 for me.
I am glad to have seen this old schoolyard fable (to me known as oonga-boonga, Not Poontah) brought to Flash. Fucking solid.
Take a stroll to your local downtown metropolis and walk around for an hour.
You've now taken in as many carcinogens as three packs of cigarettes.
Still, I'll keep my smoke out of your face.
I appreciate the review. Yeah, I see how pollution's getting out of hand. But are you sure about those statistics?
Such delicious memories from my teenage years.
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