More animation and less words. Need to find a better way to unfold the story- the flow is far too slow to keep ones attention and the scenes of any art/rudimentary animation are few and far between.
More animation and less words. Need to find a better way to unfold the story- the flow is far too slow to keep ones attention and the scenes of any art/rudimentary animation are few and far between.
thanks for the review! :)
Yeah well,
Good animation and all,
But I hate furries.
Who said anything about furries?
Well done
Take a stroll to your local downtown metropolis and walk around for an hour.
You've now taken in as many carcinogens as three packs of cigarettes.
Still, I'll keep my smoke out of your face.
I appreciate the review. Yeah, I see how pollution's getting out of hand. But are you sure about those statistics?
Age 34, Male
The Night Time
Joined on 11/26/08